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Alone by ~Dancing-All-Alone:iconDancing-All-Alone:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Philosophical > Open


In this plae that i call home

Surrounded by friends, and family who love me

Yet, I feel so alone

They will never know how I feel, truly, deep down

Actually, no one will ever know, its impossible

The best thing we can do is let our thoughts pour onto paper

Drip onto canvas

Or flow through words

Just to get it out,  so people can get an idea

Thats all they will ever get

Becasue the harsh truth is

We are all alone, and theres nothing that can change that

Not even love

Have fun with your life of lonlyness...
©2004-2008 ~Dancing-All-Alone
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Just something that came to mind last night. A thought on how we are all truly utterly alone in this life, and no one will ever understand you.

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~BloodyAngelus:iconBloodyAngelus: May 2, 2004, 8:18:56 AM
so cold....

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~Integrated:iconIntegrated: May 2, 2004, 10:33:24 AM
Nice theme. Now I'm not sure if looking for empathy is pointless? What is one to do? Good stuff there, but I suggest clearing up spelling and punctuation.

Art can form in lines or paintings.

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There are two types of people on this diseased planet // There's everybody else n then there's me, damnit
~tornskirt:icontornskirt: May 2, 2004, 11:32:09 AM
The best thing we can do is let our thoughts pour onto paper

Drip onto canvas

Or flow through words



my fav part. peep.
~the-expatriate:iconthe-expatriate: May 2, 2004, 12:26:49 PM
It's basically thoughts on paper. i think people get your meaning pretty clear and that's cool, but to be a truly better poem i think there needs to be more to it, like patterns, rhymes (if you want), syllable counts, things that turn it into an art, as well as your thoughts. That's the next step

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Don't die for your country... make the other bastard die for his!
~Dancing-All-Alone:iconDancing-All-Alone: May 2, 2004, 1:40:47 PM
This wasnt really intended to be a poem anyway, just a random thought. I didnt know what other catagory to put it under. And I am speeling mistake queen anywas, i'm she ya'll get the main idea anyway.
~MistaBobby:iconMistaBobby: May 2, 2004, 2:28:25 PM
:+fav:

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You don't see with your eyes, you see with your mind.


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~BloodyAngelus:iconBloodyAngelus: May 2, 2004, 6:03:11 PM
the emotions that i get from this....

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